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Jingle

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Even the soft whisper of slippered feet seemed to echo loudly along the hallway as Angela made her way towards the set of oaken stairs that led to the lower level of the house.

She'd thought she had heard something as she lay in her bed, slowly drifting off to sleep. It was a tiny sound, like the tingle of very small bells being disturbed by a slight draft. It had only sounded once, and she had barely heard it even then, but it had awoken her, and compelled her to leave her warm bed and venture out of her room in search of the noise.

But now at the top of the staircase, the brass chamber stick held aloft to cast the light of its weak flame down into the darkness of the lower floor, she was beginning to think herself silly.

"It could have been anything," she argued softly to herself, "A loose shutter lock, a neighbor's wind chimes." But despite her doubts she began to descend the stairs. pulling her night gown closer to her body, as the fire had gone out hours ago and a chill had begun to settle into the house.

Moving from the steps, she wound her way trough the parlor, cupping her hand around the chamber stick as the flame danced and weaved with her movements, a little too much at times, and threatened to go out. She lad left her matches upstairs and didn't look forward to making her way around blind.

Through the parlor she searched, then on to the kitchen, she peeked in the larder, the scullery and then scoured the dining room. She checked everywhere she could think of, including the box room and yet she found nothing amiss, nothing that could explain that small, barely there jingle, that her mind insisted had come from inside.

"This is ridiculous," she huffed, becoming more and more irritated by the second, "Why am I wandering around this silly house, in the dark and cold for a sound I may have not even heard?" Angela squared her shoulders and walked back though the rooms, fed up with this silly little venture, bothered that she let herself give into the curiosity.

As she moved back through the parlor, however, she thought she caught a glimpse of something, just a quick flash, of lights behind a curtain. the curtain itself was swaying ever so slightly. She shrugged it off, a draft, a glimpse of a carriage lamp headed down the road beyond the house. Things not normally out of place, and she moved on.

But, as she reached the bottom of the large staircase, it came to her again, that tiny tinkle of sound, but from upstairs instead this time. Her interest piqued yet again she gathered the bottom of her nightdress and hurried upward, stopping in the middle of the stairs to adjust her grip on the candlestick, she thought she again caught a glimpse of something. Fur was it? And that flash of light, it must be some kind of animal that had snuck in and decided her home would be a better choice than the freezing temperatures outside.


"Well, that just won't do!" She exclaimed, picking up the pace so as not to loose the little intruder. "I will not have some stray raccoon, or worse, skulking about my house in the middle of the night!"

As she reached the long hall she once again raised the chamberstick above her head, tying to cast some light, but it was pointless, the only door opened was the one that lead to her own bedroom, and she had known that. Possibly she had been hoping that another, closer door would have been open, even just a crack, and that she wouldn't have to worry about the creature invading her personal sleeping space, but alas.

With a sigh she walked quiet and steadily towards the portal, careful not to make any sudden noises that may cause the animal to dart beneath some heavy piece of furniture where she would never be able to get to it. Standing outside of the door she puffed out her candle, noticing that the chill of the house had finally settled, she could see her breath quite clearly, and waited for her eyes to adjust to the dim stream of moonlight spilling into the hallway.

When she felt she was ready, she reached out and slowly but surely eased the heavy wooden door open wider, slipping into the room, and stopped. There, sitting calmly at the foot of her bed, as if it had been waiting for her was a large cat. A very large old tom, who seemed to not have a care in the world that it was now facing the woman who's house it had so brazenly invaded, and whose bed it now sat so regally upon as if it had always belonged there.

"You, cat!" Angela barked out, her nerves returning for the most part now that she was assured it wasn't some kind of vicious possum or raccoon, "What do you think you're doing in here, SKAT!" she flapped a hand at the cat, intending to spook it as she yelled the last word. The cat however, calmly stayed put, not even the slightest flinch, nor movement of an ear.


Angela frowned heavily, how dare this beast just ignore her. She glared at the creature, wondering what could be done about it. At first glance she had thought the tom was a solid black color, but now as she looked she noticed a deep dark grey swirling pattern throughout its coat. And glaring into its eyes, those unnatural blue eyes... She shook her head, her thoughts had been wandering, she needed to get rid of this cat and now, so she could return to bed.

"Ah, the broom!", she thought. She always kept a broom behind her bedroom door, and it would be perfect for chasing this menace from her house, or at least her bedroom for the night to deal with in the morning. But as Angela reached out to grab it, the cat's demeanor suddenly changed.

No longer was he sitting calmly at the and of her bed, but standing at her feet, no longer was his silky smooth coat relaxed against his muscular form, now it was puffed out at all angles, his tail held high and puffed as well. She had thought him big before but now he looked unnaturally large and she stopped in mid movement, actually afraid now, and she dare not move. What if it attacked, it may be rabid.

Thought raced through Angela's head as she stared at the increasingly agitated animal, wincing as a high pitched keening began to issue from its mouth, its sharp white teeth and pink tongue in stark contrast to the shadow of its face.


Backed into the corner now, she had no where to go, and her initial fear had now turned to panic. She shot her hand out, grabbing the broomstick and whipping it around towards the animal, who dodged the bristles deftly, hissing and lashing out with wicked claws.

Angela waved and jabbed the broom at the enraged animal, catching it several times with a swat, but with the last jab the cat caught its claws on the bristles and with a jerk the handle slid from her sweaty palms and clattered to the floor.

The cat crouched, that long keening wail issuing from its maw, its eyes deranged as it suddenly leapt forward, right towards Angela's face and she screamed, flinging her arms up to protect herself. She braced her arms waiting for the moment of impact, the feeling of sharp cat claws and teeth digging into her arms, ready to fling the horrible beast away from her.


But, it never came, and after a moment Angela peeked from between her raised arms, thinking that maybe the cat had made a mock leap at her and was waiting. But there was no cat, not in front of her at least, and so she lowered her arms slowly and looked around the room, confused and a little shaken. The cat was gone, the house was quiet.


Angela stood there for a few minutes, listening intently for any sounds, maybe the animal had just retreated somewhere else in the room and was waiting. But no, there was nothing, the room felt empty, sounded empty. There was only Angela, and her confusion.


Putting a hand to her forehead she checked to see if she felt feverish, maybe it had all been a strange fever dream, and she hadn't been awake at all, maybe she had been sleep walking, she thought.

Moving across the room, she crawled into her bed and pulled the covers up to her chin, she was practically freezing now, as all the heat had dissipated from the house long ago, and the tea she had been sipping, that sat on her bedside table was forming a thin layer of ice across its surface.

Still thoroughly confused, Angela pondered what had just happened, if in fact it had happened at all, and as the adrenaline began to run out of her system, and the warmth of her bed began to take away her chill she started to doze, fading in and out of reality. And just as she felt herself crossing the thin line between sleep and consciousness, she again heard a faint, tiny jingling sound coming from somewhere, but this time she did not wake.
Something I literally JUST typed up, like, just saved it, didn't check it, didn't go back over it, nothing. saved and uploaded.
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AriaFawn's avatar
This was wonderful! Your writing is great and I can feel the inspiration you must have had whilst creating this piece.

I love that the protagonist's personality shines throughout this, despite that it is a short piece you still feel that you get to know the character which is a really great skill to have in writing. If you can give your character personality within the first few seconds of the story, it will draw readers in to stay so well done on that!

You did a nice job building tension throughout this as well, I love when she finds the big cat (his coat patterns makes me think he must be another form or somewhat related to Absentia?)

What I love also is that you can really read the ending multiple ways, I almost want to believe that the cat stole her soul and she is never going to wake again.

One tiny thing I noticed (and I know you said you wrote this on a whim so obviously this is understandable) You mentioned the headlights of a car but judging by the story's setting and the woman's use of a carried flame I imagine this piece takes place quite before the invention of cars so maybe if you do edit you can change it to a carriage. This was the line where it was located: She shrugged it off, a draft, a glimpse of a ca light headed down the road beyond the house.

Well done! :blackrose: